Y9/Direct Speech/AI

I wrote this like two years ago or even more when I had a huge crush on Orlando and I decided to use the piece at the beggining of this year. Don't think I am like crazy or something LOL Please leave me some comments and I hope you enjoy it.

Unexpected Sightings
By: Andrea Mariana Islas 9B

It was something extremely horrible.
She was in front of Kate and such animal , such hideous creature was helping her get up.

"Tha...thanks Kate." Jenny said in an unpleasant tone.

"No problem Rose." Kate answered, convinced she was talking to the right girl.

"But I am not Ro...

"Rose Byrne! Come here right now and stop talking!" Kate demanded inpatient.
"What is going on?" Jenny asked with a fake friendly face.

"I've got a huge problem with Orlando." Right then, Jenny realized the advantage she had on her lifetime enemy. And, by the way, she did look like Rose but not that much.

"What's wrong sweety?" When she said sweety she felt nauseaus but continued. "Come, tell me."

"Orlando caught me flirting with Brad Pitt AND kissing with Tom Cruise and got so mad!" Kate screamed at Jenny like a crazy person."He said he never wanted to see me again! He said I'm too mean!

Kate was as red as a big, fat apple and her giant cheeks weren't helping her at all. Rose was just about to laugh. I order to hide her enourmous smile she hugged Kate (increadibly disgusted) so she wouldn't notice.

"Orly hates me!" She shouted even louder this time. "How could I be so stupid!"

"It will work out fine." Jenny slipped, hoping it would never happen. "Oh, and by the way, where is he?"

Kate pointed vaguely to the right while Jenny fell once more, but now because of the laughter of watching the little dramatic scene that had just taken place. Jenny looked to the right and saw him.

It was a God drinking orangeade. It was an angel fallen from Heaven, it was Orlando Bloom. She walked through the crowd and, when she got to his table, he was gone! She began to look for him when someone placed a hand over her shoulder.
It was officially the happiest moment in her entire life. The best thing ever had just happened. There she was, staring at the most beautiful man on Earth.

y8/direct speech/EG

The thief dashed thought the ally while the cops followed him with out hesitation, no where to go
"Traped " he wispered, so he analised the situation "I could jump the fence but it may lead to more trouble. Well do I have any choice? mm not much" the man took several steps backwards and ran as fast as he could and jumped ...

"Sir"a screechy little voice said "sir wake up"
"Ow, where am I? and who are you toad?"asked Simon (the thief)
"You are at 5th avenue and I am.."the boy had never thought or even imagined that second question fustrated he closed his eyes and focused after a few seconds the little felow gave up,
"Honestly I don't know sir"
Simon bearly payed the boy attention, he was seeking for last night's money, nothing.
"Great, all that job for nothing"
"What job sir?"
Again Simon ignored him he thought"At first cops are lookin for me, second I lost all the money and third this boy is a problem"
"Sir"
"WHAT!!!"
The boy after that shoked by the scream started to launch tears.
"Hey, stop kid stop it, I said stop it!"
The boy went silent.

That day Simon got a new nickname "Mr.Grumpy" as the boy called him.
"Grumpy can we go to the fair tomorrow?"The poor fustrated thief didn't had wishes to go but he didn't want to hear winging so he nodded.
"Where do you sleep toad?"
"Well some times here others there but the best place is here in the park, follow me"
The boy pulled Simon thought half a city untill they got to that place full of trees, grass and beutifull roses a paradice for all children.
Boath layed down in the grass and went to sleep.
"Hey, put me down didn't you heared me punk get me down" a cop had the little guy
"NO!" Screamed Simon
"Don't move" Bang
Simon falled like a stick.Cries.Shoutng.Cops.Death.

Eugenio González 8B