Monday, June 4, 2007

e.e. commings by alex cardini

i liked this poem bbecause it makes u feel what he is trying to make you feel

 have found what you are like
the rain,

(Who feathers frightened fields
with the superior dust-of-sleep. wields

easily the pale club of the wind
and swirled justly souls of flower strike

the air in utterable coolness

deeds of green thrilling light
with thinned

newfragile yellows

lurch and.press

-in the woods
which
stutter
and

sing

And the coolness of your smile is
stirringofbirds between my arms;but
i should rather than anything
have(almost when hugeness will shut
quietly)almost,
your kiss

e.e. commings by alex cardini

e.e. cummings CRG

I loved cumming´s poem
"it is at moments after i have dreamed"
especially because of what it makes you feel. It has a sensation of sadness, love and loss at the same time.
I think everyone could identify with the poem, because I think everyone has hoped dreams were reality.
It also has a great rythm because of the punctuation and a very good rhyme.
The best thing about the poem is the end, because that´s when you notice why there´s a nostalgic feeling in the poem,: it´s not real.

by dania gomez english homework

        i have found what you are like
the rain,

(Who feathers frightened fields
with the superior dust-of-sleep. wields

easily the pale club of the wind
and swirled justly souls of flower strike

the air in utterable coolness

deeds of green thrilling light
with thinned

newfragile yellows

lurch and.press

-in the woods
which
stutter
and

sing

And the coolness of your smile is
stirringofbirds between my arms;but
i should rather than anything
have(almost when hugeness will shut
quietly)almost,
your kiss

Yr 9 E.E. Cummings CA

I liked the poem of Bufalo Bills defunt because it makes you wonder what it means until you get the meening I liked but not very much
Carlo Sanabria

Y9 e.e. cummings RVV

e.e. cummings wrote a poem about his father at the age six. It used a nice way to repeat the word, "father", he also uses a lot of puncuation to separate his phrases, it is pretty original for a boy that age. Raul :)

Yr 9 ee cummings EA

I liked the bufalo bill poem from E.E. Cummings
I found it iteresting.
Esteban Alvarez