Wednesday, March 14, 2007
Y8/ descriptve edron/ AL
Sat between yellow walls hearing secrets fron school and beyond. Every break, every time the kiosk queue is full with two scrambled lines pushing from everywhere you like. playing all break, the small court is full of year 8 boys screaming, tackling and laughing. The girls sat at there corner at the kiosk like every day talking of things god doesnt even know. At the barranca all the little kids (pitufines) yelling and playing in the muddy place.
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3 comments:
Very good descriptions. I think you need to develop your use of descriptve language and also your sentence structure.
Santiago Gomez 8C
Very good descriptions keep it up!
It's good, needs sentence structure a change to past tense "The girls sat at."
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