Thursday, March 15, 2007

Y8/ Description Edron/FP

English
the librery is silent old and with books everywhere. it can be as siletn as an animal looking for his prey
pens and pencils going around the classroomthey are ready to have some fun painting and drawing in the class
in the top court everybody goes to have some fun in the break and in the end they finish sweatingand drinking some water starring at the sun
the pond is very green it has many nature so you can feel you are in the jungle
the kiosk is full of smells everithing you want:
candies
chips
spagetti
burritos
and even lollipops
the barranca HAS AN UGLY SMELL!!! you cant even enjoy plaing because of the bad
smell
the moms corner is small because it is only for moms but all kids at the end of the day play happily and enjoy bthe time when the class finishes

1 comment:

Unknown said...

Needs commas spaces and too many "In the" you can't say "in the brake."