Y9/Poetry-Sonnets/AMI

Inpatient

by: Andrea Mariana Islas 9B

I wish all day I could stare at the sea,
Lay on the sand and take in summer heat.
It would be awsome, I’d love to jthere be,
Listen to waves and to my own heart’s beat.

Paradise ain’t far but go there I can’t.
Minutes there are so beautiful and nice.
Watch that perfect sunset is all I want,
I like to see how a perfect day dies.

The way the wind blows and makes my hair fly
And the moon and stars smile on me at night...
I want that right now! I feel like I’ll cry.
Should I run away? I feel like I might.

Waiting until I go back is so hard,
Almost as hard as it’s healing a heart.

I just put this on the blog because Mr Grimshaw told me to but I personally believe this is a terrible sonnet ;) Please write a comment and tell me if it is as bad as I think.