Thursday, March 22, 2007

Yr 10B/Monolog for obesity/ By Julen M

Obesity.

There is a boy called Jim, whom is now a big fat slob, or should I say, a big obese slob! Born in 1992, Jim had an ordinary standard body type for various years. It wasn’t until the year of 2003 when Jim started to have an appetite for fast food. You could say that the first thing on the menu was Mc Donald’s. He went there about three times a day and six days a week. It was an outrage, soon he’s body weight began to increase with velocity, to approximate double he’s original size.

Close friends and familiars have tried to stop this obese boy from getting any larger. Their effort was futile; fast food restaurants tend to make their meals addictive, when you have some you cant stop, not only that, but they also make the sizes of the orders ridiculously huge! Jim is now having respiratory and social problems thanks to his “super size” that he has now acquired.

Jim is quite a burden for other people, he has acquired such a state of obesity that he is no longer capable to go through doors with out getting stuck. This is Jim’s fault but even if it doesn’t look like it, the fast food is to blame; not because it makes him eat the food, but the fact that it only makes his ambitions worse and makes him fatter.




Julen Murguia. 10B

5 comments:

We are going to achieve the best! said...

i think i a good piece with good word choice, nice developed ideas and with a good critic towards obesity keep it up julen


tonny maza

We are going to achieve the best! said...

i think it is a good piece with good word choice, nice developed ideas and with a good critic towards obesity keep it up julen


tonny maza

We are going to achieve the best! said...

ei: ehhh...nice story...not reallllly a monologue. Still convincing and a good illustration to obessity

Diegooooo

We are going to achieve the best! said...

Fons sais: agree with diego not really a monologue, but indeed an entretaining piece of writing, well developed with a very good word choice!
Great!

We are going to achieve the best! said...

Not really a monologue but it has good word choice and interesting ideas about obesity.

Ana Pau